Somewhere still inside resides a spark
Of inspiration: should it see the light?
The doggerel’s bite much tamer than its bark,
Let slip the pups of war to mock the fight.

The origin’s invariably a rhythm
(And not, as you’d suppose, a simple rhyme)
The fun is then to find some long words to go with’m,
Whilst keeping half an eye upon the timing.

Quotations next: you gotta have a few
(The literati, (bless ‘em!), need their smile.)
So welcome! well-thumbed friend, the ODQ;
Help me pretend to be that bibliophile.

Line breaks also feature on steve’s check
List: I’m told it’s infra dig to need a
Break at the end of each phrase; you might wreck
The metre for the discerning reader.
(steve clears his head and gently starts to hum:
de dum, de dum, de dum, de dum, de dum.
Aaaah! That’s better!)

Okay, that’s rhythm, rhyme, some quotes and line
Breaks all in order – stir fry in a pun
Or two: relief! The damned thing’s done!

3 Responses to “….or it could have gone this way….(How to make write II)….”

  1. Billy Says:

    “The origin’s invariably a rhythm”

    Exactly; and this is, I think, my real answer to your query on procedure on GU, except that generally I get a phrase and a bit of rhythm together and build on that, like a mosaic in a way.

  2. doggerelist Says:

    Yes, just a phrase pops into your head, and you’re up and running….I used the analogy of a game of solitaire on the current GU thread for the subsequent process, but that’s misleading in that it assumes that you know the endpoint….the piece here started with the first line (which sounds daft, but they don’t always), and was intended to be a joky piece – but first time around, it went all black on me, hence the two different versions….

    Isn’t there a proper poem somewhere which self-referentially describes its own creation? I’m sure someone (maybe you?) posted a link to one previously, as I’m sure I remember reading one, but can’t remember the writer.


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